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作者: 31584466    時間: 2012-8-2 12:09     標題: 【英文】proofreading (Shyness)

本帖最後由 31584466 於 2012-8-2 09:59 編輯

There is one mistake in each numbered line.
Underline the words that are wrong and write the correct words above them.
Mark the position of a missing word above it.
Cross out any unnecessary words with a"X".

Shyness
1 What is shyness?Shyness means to feel a little scared since you are around other
2 people.Some children are born shy while some become shy have because experiences
3 they have had at the school or at home. It is also normal for people to feel shy when
4 they are placed in the new environment, for example, when they go to school for the
5 first time. This kind of shyness is temporary and often goes away while people become
6 adjusted to new environment.

7 Is shyness a problem? No, it is not if it becomes very serious. For example, some
8 people are so shy about being with people that avoid travelling by the public
9 transport. Some people are so nervous about ordering food but avoid going to
10 restaurants. This people should seek help.

11 According to some psychologist, being shy is not necessarily a hindrance to everyday
12 lives. Sometimes it is helpful to be slightly shy. A shy person may respond hastily to a
13 new situation than someone who is not shy. This is because of they prefer spending
14 time observing the scene before taking an action.

15 If you know someone who is extreme shy, try to help the person feel less nervous
16 by spending more time talking to him or her.The more time you spend with the
17 person, the more shy he or she will feel around you.
作者: 26383975    時間: 2012-8-2 12:38

蛤?
作者: 25364610    時間: 2012-8-2 12:41

2
你的簽黨讓我想到阿神
作者: 33795276    時間: 2012-8-2 12:57

What the ?! (??



2# 26383975


勇者是不穿褲子的(欸
作者: 25364610    時間: 2012-8-2 14:34

4
他屬性框是英格里緒
-
當然(?
作者: 29575741    時間: 2012-8-2 14:41

簡單來說就是每一行都會有一個地方是錯的要你更正而已
主要是在考文法的題目
作者: 32725509    時間: 2012-8-2 14:42

好多,但至少看的懂一些。
作者: 28428021    時間: 2012-8-2 14:48

太長,懶的看。
作者: 21135135    時間: 2012-8-2 15:46

本帖最後由 21135135 於 2012-8-2 07:47 編輯

There is one mistake in each numbered line.
Underline the words that are wrong and write the correct words above them.
Mark the position of a missing word above it.
Cross out any unnecessary words with a"X".

Shyness
1 What is shyness?Shyness means that feeling a little scared since you are around other
2 people.Some children are born shy while some become shy have because experiences
3 they have at the school or at home. It is also normal for people to feel shy when
4 they are placed in the new environment, for example, when they go to school for the  這行我看不出來 T_T
5 first time. This kind of shyness is temporary and often goes away while people become
6 adjust to new environment.

7 Is shyness a problem? No, it is not if it doesn't become very serious. For example, some
8 people are so shy about being with people that they avoid travelling by the public
9 transport. Some people are so nervous about ordering food that they avoid going to
10 restaurants. This kind of people should seek help.

11 According to some psychologists, being shy is not necessarily a hindrance to everyday
12 lives. Sometimes,it is helpful to be slightly shy. A shy person may respond less hastily to a
13 new situation than someone who is not shy. This is because of they prefer spending
14 time observing the scene to taking an action.

15 If you know someone who is extremely shy, try to help the person feel less nervous
16 by spending more time talking to him or her.The more time you spend on the
17 person, the less shy he or she will feel around you.

有底線的是劃掉的字,我應該錯很多 T__T
好吧我英文很爛 ˊ3ˋ 求高手指導
另外請問樓主的題目是哪裡來的? 我想多練習 OAO

作者: 29575741    時間: 2012-8-2 15:53

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4 they are placed in the new environment, for example, when they go to school for the
我覺得用for怪怪的...?!
作者: 21135135    時間: 2012-8-2 15:54

10# 29575741


OAO 我也覺得for怪怪的
可是我改不出來(?

作者: 25364610    時間: 2012-8-2 15:55

他到底在寫甚麼 哪個大神可以估狗一下(此文因該會被刪
作者: 21135135    時間: 2012-8-2 15:58

12# 25364610


這題是在寫害羞喔 OAO

作者: 25364610    時間: 2012-8-2 16:19

13
他害羞?0.0
作者: 29575741    時間: 2012-8-2 16:20

14# 25364610


...
是說這篇文章是在講害羞這個性格的人面對各種事物或情境的情況...
作者: 31584466    時間: 2012-8-2 16:53

9# 21135135
這是我暑期作業的題目
我只找出了幾個錯處
所以打上來請高手幫助= =

如果你想多練習的話
我有一篇比較難的可再打上來
作者: 26383975    時間: 2012-8-2 16:56

樓主是哪國人@A@?
作者: 21135135    時間: 2012-8-2 16:59

16# 31584466


OAO 作業好難
請問是高中英文嗎(?

作者: 31584466    時間: 2012-8-2 17:11

18# 21135135
是香港中三升中四的暑期作業
換成台灣的是不是國三升國四= =
我14,15歲左右
作者: 21135135    時間: 2012-8-2 17:14

19# 31584466


OAO 英文好好(被打
台灣是升高一 O_______O

作者: 29575741    時間: 2012-8-2 17:28

19# 31584466


我們沒有國四喔~
我們是小一~小六
國一~國三
高一~高三
大一~(按照科系就讀年數不等)
作者: 26867711    時間: 2012-8-2 21:40

挑戰一下^__^
1 What is shyness?Shyness means to feel a little scared when you are around other
2 people.Some children are born shy while some become  shyX because of experiences
3 they have had at X school or at home. It is also normal for people to feel shy when
4 they are placed in a new environment, for example, when they go to school for the
5 first time. This kind of shyness is temporary and often goes away when people become
6 adjusted to the new environment.

7 Is shyness a problem? No, it is not unless it becomes very serious. For example, some
8 people are so shy about being with people that  they avoid travelling by the public
9 transport. Some people are so nervous about ordering food that they avoid going to
10 restaurants. This kind of people should seek help.

11 According to some psychologists, being shy is not necessarily a hindrance to everyday
12 lives. Sometimes it is helpful to be slightly shy. A shy person may respond more hastily to a
13 new situation than someone who is not shy. This is because  X they prefer spending
14 time observing the scene before taking X action.

15 If you know someone who is extremely shy, try to help the person feel less nervous
16 by spending more time talking to him or her.The more time you spend with the
17 person, the less shy he or she will feel around you.




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