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作者: 31584466 時間: 2012-8-2 17:31 標題: 【英文】proofreading (Snapped by camera deal)

本帖最後由 31584466 於 2012-8-2 09:58 編輯

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Snapped by camera deal
1    I am an Argentinian businessman and would like to express
2 my unhappiness to my most recent trip to Hong Kong.
3 Before buying a digital camera I was interested in, I was checked
4 prices in different video stores in area close to Nathan Road.

5    I decided on a suitable model, price at $2,600. But once
6 the deal was made and had paid for by credit card,
7 I was shown the superior model, clearly of better
8 quality. This item was almost four times expensive-$9,625.

9    I had not intended buy this more expensive camera,
10 but because it was so much better, I eventually did.

11 However, after I left the store, I saw in another shop
12 the exact similar model for $5,505. I could not believe this!
13 I return back to the first store, but they said it was "their"
14 price and they are not accept returns.

15 I upset not only because I was overcharged more
16 than $4,000( which are a lot of money for anyone),
17 but also because these unscrupulous sales seem
18 to lack of integrity in dealing with their customers.

19 I am told this is a common practice in Hong Kong. I am suggest
20 that tourists be warned of these pratices when they arrive at the
21 aiport. I also think that the government should be require
22 stores to accept returns within three days purchase.

作者: 29575741 時間: 2012-8-2 17:31

太難了啦Q_Q
好吧試試看(欸(這人才要升國二

作者: 31584466 時間: 2012-8-2 17:34

2# 29575741
做完後要答案的我可給你

作者: 21135135 時間: 2012-8-2 17:51

吃飽飯來試試看(?
是說好久沒看英文我都退步了 QAQ

作者: 29198251 時間: 2012-8-2 17:55

那個屬性框錯了吧

【英文】proofreading (Snapped by camera deal)

這樣可能比較不會被抓

作者: 31584466 時間: 2012-8-2 17:57

5# 29198251
是喔那我改改

作者: 21135135 時間: 2012-8-2 18:24

Wrong word: underline the wrong word and write the correction above it
Extra word: delect the extra word with a "X"
Missing word: mark the position of the missing word with a"^" and insert the missing word above it
No erroe: put a tick

Snapped by camera deal
1    I am an Argentinian businessman and would like to express
2 my unhappiness on my most recent trip to Hong Kong.
3 Before buying a digital camera I was interested in, I was checked
4 prices in different video stores in area close to Nathan Road.

5    I decided on a suitable model, priced at $2,600. But once
6 the deal was made and I had paid for the bill by credit card,
7 I was shown the superior model, having clearly better
8 quality. This item was almost four times expensive-$9,625.

9    I had not intended to buy this more expensive camera,
10 but because it was so much better, I eventually did it. o_______o 不太確定要不要+it

11 However, after I left the store, I saw in another shop,
12 there was the exactly similar model priced at $5,505. I could not believe this!
13 I went back to the first store, but they said it was "their"
14 price and they did not accept returns.

15 I was upset not only because I was overcharged more
16 than $4,000( which are a lot of money for anyone),
17 but also because these unscrupulous sales seem
18 to lack for integrity in dealing with their customers.

19 I am imformed this is a common practice in Hong Kong. I am suggested
20 that tourists should be warned of these pratices when they arrive at the
21 airport. I also think that the government should be require
22 stores to accept returns within three days purchase.

顆顆這篇好難
因為不知道是不是每行都有錯 OAO
有時候眼殘就沒看到了 T_T

另外可以問一下樓主香港的英文課都是用什麼教材嗎 OAO? 除了課本以外的

作者: 31584466 時間: 2012-8-2 19:00

想看答案的可自行反白
1 ✓
2 to→ about
3 was (刪掉)
4 in ^an area
5 price → priced
6 had ^been paid / had (刪掉) / had→ was
7 the→ａ
8 times^ as/more expensive
9 intended^ to buy / buy→ buying
10 ✓
11 ✓
12 similar→ same
13 back(刪掉) ∕returned → went
14 are→could/ would/ did / do / can
15 I ^am/ was / feel/ felt/ became/ got upset
16 are→ is
17 sales→ salespeople/salespersons/ salesmen/ saleswomen/ shopkeepers
18 of(刪掉)
19 am → would / therefore / am (刪掉)
20 ✓
21 be(刪掉)
22 days ^of purchase

作者: 21135135 時間: 2012-8-2 19:11

顆顆我錯好多T_____T

作者: 31584466 時間: 2012-8-2 19:37

7# 21135135
這是我要買的書
1.Longman Elect New Senior Secondary Reading Skills Book
2.Developing Skills for HKDSE-Paper 4 Speaking Skill Book4(Set) B Aristo
3.Performance Plus 5 for the HKDSE Paper 3 Listening and Integrated Skills Pilot
4.Pilot's NSS English Language- Mastering Grammar for the HKDSE
*Reference Books
5.New Integration- Complete Pratice Papers for HKDSE English
6.Developing Skills All-in-One Practice for HKDSE Volume 2 (set B)
7.Thematic Anthology Volume 1(set B)
Thematic Anthology Volume 2(set B)
我都不知道學校為什要我們買這麼多書= =
我全部書加起來要4000多港元

作者: 23833639 時間: 2012-8-2 19:59

10# 31584466

OAO 難怪你們英文很好顆顆(?
我們是有看雜誌但是補充的教材就沒有那麼多了

作者: 29575741 時間: 2012-8-2 22:20

11# 23833639

對啊我們也是OAO
老實說我可能會比較喜歡香港教材(?

作者: 31584466 時間: 2012-8-2 22:37

12# 29575741
你喜歡聽Adele的歌?我比較喜歡Someone like you 和Set fire to the rain這兩首歌

作者: 21135135 時間: 2012-8-3 06:20

13# 31584466

我也喜歡喔(咦 XD
rumor has it 和 rolling in the deep 也不錯

作者: 27275364 時間: 2012-8-8 13:03

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31584466 發表於 2012-8-2 17:31

我在考試竟然在Proofreading敗了(?)

作者: 24368510 時間: 2012-8-14 14:48

偵錯題??且待老夫一一拆解(等一下.....舉白旗了
此非老夫能力所能及之問題...

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