標題: 【英文】句子改錯。 [打印本頁]

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作者: 39830971    時間: 2013-10-7 20:56     標題: 【英文】句子改錯。

It destroys the things he wanted to do.

He was not feel great.

Torry saw a sea in the train,he had a idea wanted to do.

就是以上這些了。

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作者: 20587772    時間: 2013-10-7 21:18

He did not feel great.

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作者: 28180977    時間: 2013-10-7 21:28

本帖最後由 28180977 於 2013-10-7 21:38 編輯

It destroyed some things that he wanted to do.

He didn't feel good.
great改成good的原因是"great"本身就是褒意很重的詞  刻意接在否定句後面怎麼看都怪(ry


Torry saw the sea from the train,then he got an idea which he was going to realize.

改這樣只是感覺比較順orz

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