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標題: 【英文】幫評分 [打印本頁]

作者: 46328057    時間: 2014-11-9 15:57     標題: 【英文】幫評分

有誰可以幫忙看看我的文章:
是今天去考中級的:

請板上厲害的人幫忙看看大概能幾級分。

中翻英題目:Dan自從上高中以後,常常熬夜玩電腦遊戲。他的父母非常擔心他的健康,所以他們鼓勵他去參加社團。上個月,Dan參加了賞鳥社,這樣他就可以從事戶外活動和結交新朋友。下星期六,他要去山上賞鳥,他希望到時候可以看到很多不同種類的鳥類。
I wrote this:
Dan usually plays computer games over night since he was a senior high school student.His parents were worried about his health, so they encouraged Dan to take part in a club. Last month, Dan joined the bird-watching club that makes him not only can have some outdoor activities but also can make new friends. Next Saturday , he will go bird watching in the mountain,and he hopes he can see different types of birds at that time.
作文題目:
你的朋友Bred在學校的歌唱比賽中失利,他為此感到傷心難過,請寫一封信安慰他,內容包含:
(1)分享你失敗、挫折的經驗。
(2)告訴他調適心情的方法。
●信件格式不用寫
I knew that you failed in the singing contest and it makes you sad. I also understood how sad it is because I failed at last GEPT test, too. Last year, I studied English hard and memorized a lot of vocabulary to prepare the GEPT test, but I didn't pass the exam.When I knew the news, I frustrated a lot and cried two hours or even more.I supposed that why was this so? Why the teachers didn't give me a good score instead of the bad grade? I felt down until one day, my English teacher talked to me.He said it was difficult to pass the exam, this needed to more English ability. I understood I have to be more hard-working to study it instead of complaining. So,cheer up and don't be sad.If you spend more time to practice, you can do well,too!
You can reduce your stress and turn your mind by listening to music or hitting a soft pillow to decrease your sad feelings. "Losing isn't everything." Just do it and spend time doing it.Even a dream can be true!
作者: 28296579    時間: 2014-11-9 16:33

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