【英文】proofreading (Snapped by camera deal)
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Snapped by camera deal
1 I am an Argentinian businessman and would like to express
2 my unhappiness to my most recent trip to Hong Kong.
3 Before buying a digital camera I was interested in, I was checked
4 prices in different video stores in area close to Nathan Road.
5 I decided on a suitable model, price at $2,600. But once
6 the deal was made and had paid for by credit card,
7 I was shown the superior model, clearly of better
8 quality. This item was almost four times expensive-$9,625.
9 I had not intended buy this more expensive camera,
10 but because it was so much better, I eventually did.
11 However, after I left the store, I saw in another shop
12 the exact similar model for $5,505. I could not believe this!
13 I return back to the first store, but they said it was "their"
14 price and they are not accept returns.
15 I upset not only because I was overcharged more
16 than $4,000( which are a lot of money for anyone),
17 but also because these unscrupulous sales seem
18 to lack of integrity in dealing with their customers.
19 I am told this is a common practice in Hong Kong. I am suggest
20 that tourists be warned of these pratices when they arrive at the
21 aiport. I also think that the government should be require
22 stores to accept returns within three days purchase. |
