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【英文】proofreading (Shyness)

本帖最後由 31584466 於 2012-8-2 09:59 編輯

There is one mistake in each numbered line.
Underline the words that are wrong and write the correct words above them.
Mark the position of a missing word above it.
Cross out any unnecessary words with a"X".

Shyness
1 What is shyness?Shyness means to feel a little scared since you are around other
2 people.Some children are born shy while some become shy have because experiences
3 they have had at the school or at home. It is also normal for people to feel shy when
4 they are placed in the new environment, for example, when they go to school for the
5 first time. This kind of shyness is temporary and often goes away while people become
6 adjusted to new environment.

7 Is shyness a problem? No, it is not if it becomes very serious. For example, some
8 people are so shy about being with people that avoid travelling by the public
9 transport. Some people are so nervous about ordering food but avoid going to
10 restaurants. This people should seek help.

11 According to some psychologist, being shy is not necessarily a hindrance to everyday
12 lives. Sometimes it is helpful to be slightly shy. A shy person may respond hastily to a
13 new situation than someone who is not shy. This is because of they prefer spending
14 time observing the scene before taking an action.

15 If you know someone who is extreme shy, try to help the person feel less nervous
16 by spending more time talking to him or her.The more time you spend with the
17 person, the more shy he or she will feel around you.

蛤?
sᴇᴇ ᴛʜᴇ sᴜɴ sᴇᴛ,
ᴛʜᴇ ᴅᴀʏ ɪs ᴇɴᴅɪɴɢ

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你的簽黨讓我想到阿神

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What the ?! (??



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勇者是不穿褲子的(欸
退論很久了。
以前我是澄、也是汎汎,現在請叫我菘菘。:)

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他屬性框是英格里緒
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當然(?

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簡單來說就是每一行都會有一個地方是錯的要你更正而已
主要是在考文法的題目
木登日生

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好多,但至少看的懂一些。
停止、跳動

   世界是黑色的,而流出來的液體是紅色

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太長,懶的看。

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本帖最後由 21135135 於 2012-8-2 07:47 編輯

There is one mistake in each numbered line.
Underline the words that are wrong and write the correct words above them.
Mark the position of a missing word above it.
Cross out any unnecessary words with a"X".

Shyness
1 What is shyness?Shyness means that feeling a little scared since you are around other
2 people.Some children are born shy while some become shy have because experiences
3 they have at the school or at home. It is also normal for people to feel shy when
4 they are placed in the new environment, for example, when they go to school for the  這行我看不出來 T_T
5 first time. This kind of shyness is temporary and often goes away while people become
6 adjust to new environment.

7 Is shyness a problem? No, it is not if it doesn't become very serious. For example, some
8 people are so shy about being with people that they avoid travelling by the public
9 transport. Some people are so nervous about ordering food that they avoid going to
10 restaurants. This kind of people should seek help.

11 According to some psychologists, being shy is not necessarily a hindrance to everyday
12 lives. Sometimes,it is helpful to be slightly shy. A shy person may respond less hastily to a
13 new situation than someone who is not shy. This is because of they prefer spending
14 time observing the scene to taking an action.

15 If you know someone who is extremely shy, try to help the person feel less nervous
16 by spending more time talking to him or her.The more time you spend on the
17 person, the less shy he or she will feel around you.

有底線的是劃掉的字,我應該錯很多 T__T
好吧我英文很爛 ˊ3ˋ 求高手指導
另外請問樓主的題目是哪裡來的? 我想多練習 OAO

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4 they are placed in the new environment, for example, when they go to school for the
我覺得用for怪怪的...?!
木登日生

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