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Snapped by camera deal
1      I am an Argentinian businessman and would like to express
2 my unhappiness on my most recent trip to Hong Kong.
3 Before buying a digital camera I was interested in, I was checked
4 prices in different video stores in area close to Nathan Road.

5      I decided on a suitable model, priced at $2,600. But once
6 the deal was made and I had paid for the bill by credit card,  
7 I was shown the superior model, having clearly better
8 quality. This item was almost four times expensive-$9,625.

9     I had not intended to buy this more expensive camera,
10 but because it was so much better, I eventually did it. o_______o 不太確定要不要+it

11    However, after I left the store, I saw in another shop,
12 there was the exactly similar model priced at $5,505. I could not believe this!
13 I went back to the first store, but they said it was "their"
14 price and they did not accept returns.

15    I was upset not only because I was overcharged more
16 than $4,000( which are a lot of money for anyone),
17 but also because these unscrupulous sales seem
18 to lack for integrity in dealing with their customers.

19    I am imformed this is a common practice in Hong Kong. I am suggested
20 that tourists should be warned of these pratices when they arrive at the
21 airport. I also think that the government should be require
22 stores to accept returns within three days purchase.



顆顆這篇好難
因為不知道是不是每行都有錯 OAO
有時候眼殘就沒看到了 T_T

另外可以問一下樓主香港的英文課都是用什麼教材嗎 OAO? 除了課本以外的

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5# 29198251
是喔 那我改改

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那個屬性框錯了吧

【英文】proofreading (Snapped by camera deal)

這樣可能比較不會被抓

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吃飽飯來試試看(?
是說好久沒看英文我都退步了 QAQ

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2# 29575741
做完後要答案的我可給你

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太難了啦Q_Q
好吧試試看(欸(這人才要升國二
木登日生

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